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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-08-12 02:02 PM



Tides Of Friendship
     
Our bond is a vessel
which ebbs and flows
through the vast sea
swaying with intensity
awash over the glistening shoreline
building sandcastles
within our hearts
     
When the storms of life
rage on to sink my ship
and all my dreams are forced ashore
you sail towards me
in swift currents of turquoise wave
cleansing my soul
with moist caress
and, I wade in your pool
of understanding, love and tenderness
upon the tides of friendship
     
When my wings unfold
and I am free to fly once more,
you let me ride the waves alone
across the deep majestic ocean
of moonswept mist,
warm and inviting
from friendship's bliss

By Melissa P. Monette

     

Dedicated to all my friends at Passions
Love n' hugs  




[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 08-12-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
rosepetals25
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1 posted 2001-08-12 02:09 PM


Melissa,

    Isn't wonderful to have such understanding friends who always offer an outstretched hand? This is a beautiful thank you to all your friends   I greatly enjoyed

~hugs~

TaraB

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2001-08-12 02:38 PM


wonderful poem and great pictures too...sweet of you to write...helen
Passions Voice
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3 posted 2001-08-12 02:59 PM


This is a wonderful poem.  It's so nice to be somewhere where everyone cares.

Great job.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-08-12 03:05 PM




When the storms of life
rage on to sink my ship
and all my dreams are forced ashore
you sail towards me
in swift currents of turquoise wave
cleansing my soul
with moist caress
and, I wade in your pool
of understanding, love and tenderness
upon the tides of friendship
   ----------------------

Wow.......I simply loved every part of this sweet enchanting drift .....and the music was quite quite wonderful......

Melissa.....
You are wonderful.......
{{{Hugs}}}  

Thank you
**************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

jwesley
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5 posted 2001-08-12 03:07 PM


Beautiful Melissa...all of it!  Passions is the home of friends and you show it extremely well.

jwesley

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-08-12 03:08 PM


When my wings unfold
and I am free to fly once more,
you let me ride the waves alone
across the deep majestic ocean
of moonswept mist,
warm and inviting
from friendship's bliss
==============================

right back at you Melis...
yes...poetry and friendship...the two make for wonderful inspire and sanctuary...
the imagery in this is as delightful as the kind intend.
beautiful butterfly poetess  
jm

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

Honeybee
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7 posted 2001-08-12 03:22 PM


Tara, Helen, Passion's Voice, MyEnchanted_Melody
jwesley and Janet Marie
Thank you for your sweet replies  

I was in a sentimental mood today
and wanted to thank you all for your gift of friendship  

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2001-08-12 04:16 PM



Sentimentality's shawl sits well on your shoulders....

Martie
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9 posted 2001-08-12 04:36 PM


Melissa--Beautifully and sweetly stated!
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2001-08-12 05:52 PM


Melissa, this was truly a joy to read, and a special and beautiful poem.
Sandra

ellie LeJeune
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11 posted 2001-08-12 06:00 PM


Lovely, Melissa; friendship is precious and so hard to find a friend who won't let you down and stays steadfast through thick and thin! Beautifully done! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
12 posted 2001-08-12 06:10 PM


Hi Melissa, thank you for your sweet poem.
It's strange isn't it that one can feel such bond and friendship for people you never met, just through their words.

Sometimes I've a feeling I've known some of you all my life.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

13 posted 2001-08-12 07:37 PM


Thank you for the privelage of being called "friend".  Thanks and hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
14 posted 2001-08-13 11:00 AM


Melissa,
  What a beautiful gift and compliment to your MANY friends at Passions.  We are all blest by your creativity and talent. God bless you real good friend! Dennis :^)

Janette
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15 posted 2001-08-13 01:10 PM


Ahhhhhhhhh, Melissa, this is precious!
Chelsea~
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Ontario, CANADA
16 posted 2001-08-17 09:03 AM



Missy, this is
wonderful,
thank you  
I'll always
consider you
one of my best
friends

Kit McCallum
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17 posted 2001-08-18 10:52 AM


Beautiful Melissa! The phrasing in this lovely piece is exquisite and the imagery is wonderful. Very nicely written indeed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

kaile
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18 posted 2001-08-18 01:53 PM


melissa,

you are getting me sentimental too...lets drink to friendship, shall we?

i'm just collecting stories in life....colleen from survivor 1

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
19 posted 2001-08-18 02:02 PM


Melissa,
Wonderful presentation, you write very well.

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
20 posted 2001-08-18 02:14 PM


Great loving tribute Melissa and you penned it so very well!! I wish you the very best as you continue on in the language of poetry!
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