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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-08-12 01:50 AM


To Whom I may Concern
~~~


Through reminisce
a Church Bell's chimes
roll out in sweet refrain
To guide me through the by-gone times
and relive them
once again
~
I drift along
a sunkissed land
entwined
with crystal streams
Entranced completely
hand in hand
with love's young treasured dreams
~
A spell thus cast
from rapture's eyes
instills enduring flames
Conveys a heart
through paradise
amidst
celestial plains
~
These visions fade
but ne're from sight
without near grows insane
This dream fulfills
the longest night ...
e're you hold me
close
again
~~~



© Copyright 2001 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
oh2beme
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1 posted 2001-08-12 04:29 AM


Beautifully written...I enjoyed every minute of it...thank you for sharing
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-08-12 06:55 AM


Of course my eyes did a double take on the title [coffee is still perking] so I was grinning even before I opened it, and of course, no surprise, just delight, as the poem played out before me...

It is SO good to see you back, Rex, and in fine form!

rwood
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3 posted 2001-08-12 12:16 PM


Excellent flow. You write in beautiful hues of love. (It wasn't a butterfly)   You're so sweet.
Sincerely,
Regina

Nan
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4 posted 2001-08-12 12:17 PM


There's nothing like a good hug from someone you love...Nicely done, my friend...
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5 posted 2001-08-12 01:23 PM


Oh so very beautiful. Much enjoyed Rex.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-08-12 01:49 PM


Oh,Rex~
VERY nice flow to this lovely piece~
Thank you for being here to share~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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7 posted 2001-08-12 02:55 PM


Rex,

     Wonderful write   i greatly enjoyed.

TaraB

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8 posted 2001-08-12 07:50 PM


This is soooooooo sweet, Rex!
Martie
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9 posted 2001-08-12 08:27 PM


Rex Allen--This flows so beautifully and the message is lovely!
jwesley
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10 posted 2001-08-12 10:01 PM


You definitely have a flare Mr. McCoy...enjoyed your touch here...

jwesley

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
11 posted 2001-08-14 12:06 PM


Again, a special thankyou to you all for your kind support. Although I'm seldom here much any more, I appreciate the kindness you extend to me as I wander back to Passions
It's good to see all the new faces as well as so many familiar ones
What a place!  Tis like no other!

Rex

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12 posted 2001-08-14 06:14 PM


Ohhh, SIR! I love this! Now where have you been? Hmm??

[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 08-14-2001).]

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