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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-08-10 06:15 AM


When A Man Loves A Woman

When a man loves a woman
the stars seem a little brighter.
When a man loves a woman he feels
his burden has become a little lighter.
He finds he is no longer all alone
in a world that was serving him
way too much loneliness and sorrow.
With his sweetheart in his arms
he feels the joy of today and
desires the beauty of tomorrow.
Within loves flow the moon
romantically emits a warmer glow
for a special moment has been born
and now love is all they know.
How nice his heart has found the love it needs
and he will no longer live his life alone.
Surely the world becomes a better place
when love has found a home.

Jameslee@August10,2001


© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
1 posted 2001-08-10 06:24 AM


Indeed, and so the same for the other side. Written with heart! I enjoyed this verse completely.
Sincerely,
Regina

maeve
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since 2001-08-01
Posts 139
In the Outback
2 posted 2001-08-10 07:11 AM


James, this is simply lovely. As Regina says..it works both ways. I enjoyed it very much.

Maeve

Take me home to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

EagleOne
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3 posted 2001-08-10 08:49 AM


"Surely the world becomes a better place
when love has found a home"

Surely it must! Well done!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2001-08-10 10:04 AM


OH my sweet friend...you brought a smile to my heart with this one...hugs to you
ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2001-08-10 10:05 AM


So true James and you have expressed it very well here!  Good work!
Ariana
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Orlando, Florida
6 posted 2001-08-10 12:06 PM


James

You have spoken beautiful words and they are ever so true.  When there is love, you feel you can do anything and everything.  Well done!

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
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where the sky and horizon meet
7 posted 2001-08-10 12:09 PM


ahh...the sweet power of love    
You speak of it well James.  
Awesome write!
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Sven
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8 posted 2001-08-10 01:05 PM


you understand . . .

great job my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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