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SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-08-09 11:17 AM


I lay,
surrounded by dry brittle grass,
arms outstretched,
welcoming the peace of my surroundings.
A tree to the right of my view
holds my attention
with its flickering leaves;
nature's clapping.
A flash of orange
comes into the picture as the wind
catches a black-eyed susan to my left.
A quiet buzzing reminds me
that I am not truly alone,
and a I close my eyes to better
hear the sounds.
I can hear the silent clicking
of all the dry blades around me,
and a dragonfly flitting by
tells me that this is nature's footsteps.
I open my eyes then
and stare into the face
of my furry feline companion.
There is pleasure in his eyes,
and when I get up to go back home
he rubs along my legs
as if to say, "going so soon?"
and I promise myself to come back
again tomorrow.



© Copyright 2001 Krista C. - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-09 11:21 AM


SmittenKitten~

'A tree to the right of my view
holds my attention
with its flickering leaves;
nature's clapping'


What an originally captivating thought ! ! !  
My goodness ... I like it !
~*Marge*~

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SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-08-09 11:25 AM


this is for making big smiles!!  
I like this very much  

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
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where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-08-09 11:31 AM


Marge ~     thank you for your enthusiasm!  
Your attitude is catchy for sure       
You have made my day!    

SEA ~ awww, it's always a pleasure to make someone smile!  
Thank you for stopping by and enjoying!  




[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-09-2001).]

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