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WRBreezin
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0 posted 2001-08-09 09:02 AM




Billowy

What voice sweet billowy mime
a noon day falsetto of signs not sound
strain my ears to hear and open my eyes
to the gentle interpretation of the soul
gathering love to prize


Willie
©2001



© Copyright 2001 Robert Joseph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-09 09:10 AM


WRBreezin,
Sounds good to me. Enjoyed

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2 posted 2001-08-09 09:22 AM



Very good!

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3 posted 2001-08-09 11:04 AM


WRBreezin~
Welcome to Passions !  
Muchly enjoyed this.
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-08-09 11:01 PM


Agree with the others, I like the simplicity combined with beautiful flow.
Sandra

WRBreezin
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5 posted 2001-08-11 07:55 AM



Thanks, to one and all, I'm glad this caught your eyes!

Willie

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