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Dead-heart Chronicles (#3) |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio 
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DEAD-HEART CHRONICLES (#3) --- I will be gone tomorrow I have no place to go don't ask me, please don't ask me I don't know I must be gone tomorrow I have stayed beyond my time poetry is easy but my life doesn't rhyme when the sun comes up tomorrow you will, I'm sure, go on and that is as it should be only I'll be gone [This message has been edited by Constance (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Constance--There is a feeling of deep melancholy in this poem...it is disturbing...makes me want to do something to make this person stay...is it you? In any case, hugs! |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Martie- Not to worry. My "Dead Heart Chronicles" are all very dark. I write them in order to get beyond the place they come from. I know you understand that. I'm ok, bless your caring heart! |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Martie- Not to worry. My "Dead Heart Chronicles" are all very dark. I write them in order to get beyond the place they come from. I know you understand that. I'm ok, bless your caring heart! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yes, I understand. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sounds like a "weary" heart...I have felt this before. Nicely written! ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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