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If I Were the Sun
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If I Were the Sun |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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If I Were the Sun If I were the sun, I’d embellish your face With light golden beams glowing down from the sky And spread out your petals to warmly embrace The smooth velvet layers that so mystify If I were a rain cloud, I’d drizzle the sweet and succulent wetness within every crease The water of life I would lay your feet And you’d drink of my cup of contentment and peace If I were a butterfly floating above I’d touch your soft petals with wing tip that glows Though sunbeams and raindrops and kisses of love Could never transfigure this most perfect rose Elizabeth Santos 8/8/01 |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Perfect indeed! Beautiful wonders of nurturing nature here. Lovely. Sincerely, Regina |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You are the sun, Liz.. You are indeed...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, I do the best I can!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Elizabeth!! But of course!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your cadence is a sunbeam streaming down and warming us with the flow of it! Fantastic! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank you sweet Elizabeth  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
You've painted an exquisite picture of admiration.  Truly enjoyed your brilliance!  Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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