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shadow974
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0 posted 2001-08-07 03:03 PM



The Box

There is a box
A plain old box
That held life within its folds
A battered box
After many knocks
Where love was enclosed

From holding hands
To hard demands
These and more did it hold

Each month or so
We added light
And made the old new
We peeked inside
We laughed we cried
Then we closed it and we grew

Memories are held inside
A wink a sigh a baby’s cry
From childhood and beyond
It held life in are view

There wasn’t
one of a few hundred or so
That didn’t put a twinkle in her eye
And a tear in mine
A box so old
It held pure gold
And we will cherish it until we die

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

© Copyright 2001 Daniel Owens - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-07 03:06 PM



What a lovely box,
containing memories
and photos,
locks of hair
and cameos...

simple thoughts
you've brought
with this
lovely thoughts
filled with bliss

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-08-07 03:08 PM


I recently went through some old boxes so I really related to this one. SO much, thank you for this.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2001-08-10 05:07 PM


Memory boxes are definitely powerful things in many different ways.  This part resonated with me:

There wasn’t
one of a few hundred or so
That didn’t put a twinkle in her eye
And a tear in mine

Well done, Dan.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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