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cpalmer
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0 posted 2001-08-06 01:47 AM





Dream Catcher

Dream Catcher, dream catcher
Find me a dream
Capture a myth
Play it for me....

Dream Catcher, dream catcher
Take all my fears
Fly them away
Dry up my tears....

Dream Catcher, dream catcher
Help me sleep well
Dream dulcet dreams
Under your spell....

Dream Catcher, dream catcher
Sleep I invite
Closing my eyes
Bid you goodnight....


Cpalmer August 2, 2001

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-08-06 01:51 AM


Dream Catcher, dream catcher
Help me sleep well
Dream dulcet dreams
Under your spell....
===========================

very  cool poem...kinda like a meditative chant to relax you to sleep...
love the alliteration line in that verse
well done...sleep well  

Sinister Handed
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2 posted 2001-08-06 01:56 AM


That's awesome.
I can't help but want to rush off to sleep and see what turns up now.

JLR
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3 posted 2001-08-06 02:00 AM


This has a great melody to it!
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-08-06 02:04 AM




A very nice piece......and yes I agree it seems like some evocative chant.......

Thank you
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cpalmer
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5 posted 2001-08-06 09:46 AM


Janet Marie,
Thank you...when I heard the word dream catcher...The words just started flowing! Everytime I read it I get the tune of Matchmaker in my head...I slept well!Thanks again!
Cindi


Sinisterhanded,
Thank you so much for reading...Im glad you liked it!
Cindi

JLR
As I said above...the melody that comes into my head is Matchmaker...LOL at least for the first part!  Im glad you liked it!
Thank you
Cindi

Melody
Thank you so much...
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2001-08-06 06:38 PM



cindi-
   Sure enough...now you've got 'Matchmaker'
   going through my head! LOL
   I really like this one..
  
   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
7 posted 2001-08-06 07:34 PM


Vicky!
Believe me it has been going through mine ever since I wrote this!! LOL  Thank you Im glad you liked it?
Love ya
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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