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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-08-04 12:26 PM




What A Friend Was He ?

Always remain close
This he said to me
Why spin me yarns
What a friend was he ?

Keep forever friends
Now until eternity
I kept my promise
What a friend was he?

Ache pains my heart
Tears none will see
Foolishly I trusted
What a friend was he ?

The saying goodbye
Never said to me
Just became silent
What a friend was he ?

In my yearning heart
Truth for all to see
Why does he ignore
What a friend was he ?

Obviously he is gone
Without telling me
I search the cause
What a friend was he ?

Hope

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ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng
1 posted 2001-08-04 12:34 PM


I guess he was not much of a friend.  I have a friend like that, too.

ShannonM

illusion
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since 2001-06-19
Posts 296

2 posted 2001-08-04 02:52 PM


Not much of one.   I believe a friend would have the guts to give you an honest goodbye, but we unfortunately let ourselves be fooled by pretenders.   Well written.
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