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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Flying I walk upon a bed of coals Knolls of sad, yet some are droll. Some in mire and some on fire Some burn ire and some are dire. Thoughts that spill over the brim Whims of plain and some are prim. Those that grow in misty scheme Some will tour in only dream. Most will disappear at sea Some cook down to thin of bree. Some will stay within my mind Some quite gosh and some unkind. But ever will they shoal my goal And ever will they toll my soul. And ever will the circles ride The life and times of this abide. So fly the heights your wings allow Fly them high and fly them now. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
while we're still able my friend. . . great job. . . and wise words. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'd like to protest that first line... you dont walk...you fly ... and then you and Randy share your adventures with us in these poetic photographs of rhyme divine..like a poetic travelog to the Eden in your mind. So where are we going next? Shangri-la?.. I hear they are serving raspberry tea for two there  *winkiewinkie*  me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thank you and keep flying. JM, Yes, I'll meet you in Shangri-la and we'll have some tea and crumpets and coquet away the afternoon. love ya Randy and stinky |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
This is not one to get buried in the blue depths! Time for a little "reincarnation", so back up it goes. I truly liked your artistic rendering in this poem, Sy -- a very good encapsulation of your style and thought process. I enjoyed this one very much. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes Sir! Spreading wings now... |
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