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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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daybreak quietly peeking break of ray ‘pon Cardinal beams of light meet chirp greet morn vividly songs stream singing daylight come night’s dark folds away good spider unweaves dreamcatcher that did its work dawn now chases night |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I like these.They are so neat.so much can be said in such a short time. great job |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Like taking a shot without a chaser. Enjoyed *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you really do these so well my friend. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ At break of day 'pon windowsill Fluttered reds with tiny bills Chirping thanks for sunflower seeds Gracious for the giving~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I like these very much, especially the last one. You've written a beautiful dawning. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunshine- These are just lovely. I especially enjoyed this... "good spider unweaves dreamcatcher that did its work dawn now chases night" Love it!  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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