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on an el (challenge answer) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*head over to Poetry Challenge to see what the challenge is!!* on an el I go to my jo to me he is as I am in me so I go on an el he to me I to he ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You did an el of a jo on this... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I love the things you do with poetry, sir!   Sven Pen sings his own song. I like it.  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You know what? - I thought that this challenge couldn't be done well, using words with only 2 letters, but the Sven Pen does it again!  ~ ~ ~ Also, I would like to add my thanks to Temptress for coining the phrase "Sven Pen", afterall, the world of poets must know about her genius! hehehe....She has allowed me to borrow that name for only two cents  okay, okay, Temptress I'm cheap I know, you want more?! Okay, I'll keep my two cents worth |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hmmm...i like this very much...sometimes, its best to express those complex emotions in an endearing simple manner... what does "el" mean? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine. . . thanks!! I try. . . Temptress. . . thank you my friend. . . I do try to be different. . . glad that you noticed. . . Melissa. . . never say never. . . and thank you. . . and I hope that Temptress gives you part of the royalties on that name!! LOL faterider. . . yes, sometimes simpler is better. . . thanks. . . oh, and an "el" is simply short for "elevated train". . . like a subway, but on rails in the air. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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