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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2001-08-03 09:14 PM




You say you wish to
know me?
to see just who I am
if I am reality
or a perfect sham?
I'm Predictably
unpredictable
that's all that
need be said
blow out the
candles darling
& simply come
to bed...


~Tier
8/01



© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-08-03 09:24 PM


what a perfect way to get to know someone. . .  

I love it Tier. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-08-03 09:49 PM


I really like this, tiersdin, not for the same reason as Sven, though  

it's so fresh and tender, simple, matter-of-fact...don't make me complicated, just get to know me

"blow the candle"  nice touch

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2001-08-03 09:58 PM


Big Grin Here!  Loved this!

jwesley

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-08-04 12:38 PM


LOL and agreeing @ Sven!  
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