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Open Poetry #15

{{{ Yours......No More My Own }}}

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2001-08-03 02:10 PM

~~~Yours.....No More My Own~~~

Yours....
No more my own

Yours
Is the heartbeat of me
That seems to dance
Eternally

Yours
Is the raging
Up roaring
Sea
Always
Tucked deep within me

Yours
Is the sunset
Of my dreams
Seen at last
From within
The shades
Of your rainbow

Yours
Is the whole of me
Left forever
Unattended
Never really known
Never really understood
Until
The coming of that other me

Yours
No more my own
No…..more …….my own
The thoughts,
That I thought they’d forever
Stay
Locked away,
The heart
That I thought
It would forever be
A port of mystery.

Yours
They are now
Unlock their secrets
Stumble forever with their
Unfathomed seas
Claim the right
To solve their mystery
They are yours now
No more my own

And I am...
Free...
Free...
Since you have now
The burden
Of that mystery.
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Thank you

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-08-03 02:22 PM

Love the ending... very nicely done..and I am enchanted as usual...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-08-03 08:23 PM

M.E.M. This is lovely. I like the idea of the blending, and giving over of burdens because you are one.
Nice thoughts, If they would only come true.
Sandra

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-08-03 08:33 PM

this is excellent. . . to be not one, not the other. . . but as one. . .

well written and superbly flowing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-08-03 11:06 PM

~Ron~

This poem came so suddenly.......I sat down without any clear idea except the line (Yours......no more my own).......and the rest of it just poured out.......

So I'm glad that you liked the ending ...and thank you for your kind comment......

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~Sandra~

oh..Yes...if they could only come true.....

Thank you dearest.......

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~Sven~

"to be not one, not the other. . . but as one. . . "

You have said it in few words dear friend.....and as always I'm ever grateful that you loved it.....

Thank you
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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-08-03 11:59 PM

MyEnchantedMelody~
Just such lovely, lovely thoughts in a lovely presentation.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

6 posted 2001-08-04 12:03 PM

Yes...very heartfelt. And I agree...excellent presentation.

ShannonM

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2001-08-04 01:55 AM

Dearest ~Marge~

I wouldn't have been able to present it this way without your useful help and tips......
I'm really grateful for that.......

And I'm glad that the long time I spent on that presentation wasn't wasted.....

Thank you again.......
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~Shannon~

Thank you for reading it.....and I'm happy you liked it.
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MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

8 posted 2001-08-05 02:43 PM

An honor and a responsibility, but one must be careful to have something left for one's self...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

9 posted 2001-08-06 12:21 PM

Yes......Mark........an honor and a responsibility.....

But that who takes such a responsibility must be worthy of it......or else all is lost.....

Thank you for your ever wonderful vision and perception.......

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[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 08-06-2001).]

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