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Open Poetry #15

How Many Times?

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

0 posted 2001-08-03 03:05 AM

I find myself wondering
Over and over
How many times
Have you done this before?

Perhaps trust
Would not be so
Lacking,
Had I not read
So much of
Your poetry.

For I see the
Reflection of
You in your
Words,

Words you did
Not know I had
Seen,

Words you did
Not believe I
Would recognize

Disguised with
Different names...

Have you told me
Many lies?

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-08-03 08:16 AM

Ouch!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-03 08:25 AM

edgy... terse statement of observation and doubt..nicely written.. Good work here.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

3 posted 2001-08-04 07:19 PM

Clandestine expression turned into full disclosure... a distinct sense of "uh-oh..."
Strong poem.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

4 posted 2001-08-04 10:57 PM

Thank you, Lady, Cpat and Mark for taking the time to read and offer your comments.

ShannonM

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