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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-08-02 06:17 PM



Okay..okay.     So I'm late, but its finally done, eh?     

I am passionate and steadfast.
I wonder why the night wraps me in lonliness.
I hear a soft voice on the wind.
I see a kiss fluttering on my lips.
I want to know how far I can take my passion.
I am passionate and steadfast.

I pretend that I am a princess strong as stone.
I feel my destiny calling from fairy tale lands.
I touch the gentle arm of my wounded lover.
I worry that our times is fleeting like the ocean meeting with the sand in waves.
I cry when my hear ponders loss.
I am passionate and steadfast.

I understand why my friendship is required.
I say that love knows no ending.
I dream that one day I may explore myself.
I try to conceal an unreturned love.
I hope my heart always shows.
I am passionate and steadfast.


[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 08-03-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-08-02 08:44 PM


yes, you are passionate and steadfast, and I am always glad to see you write, as I enjoy the passionate read!!!  Enjoyed very much!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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Arkansas
2 posted 2001-08-02 09:16 PM


I am what I am, no more, no less, but only what I can be for you..hmm, think a dolphin said that once..a very very nice write and I see the tenderness in this one...very gentle smile, gentle maid
Sven
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3 posted 2001-08-02 09:27 PM


yes you are all these things indeed. . . well done. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

kaile
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4 posted 2001-08-03 03:20 AM


i dream that one day i may explore myself

i hope my heart always shows

temptress, you have echoed my exact sentiments....i related to those two lines strongly...

glad to meet a kindred spirit within these pages...grins

Nan
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5 posted 2001-08-03 09:14 AM


I love the "I Am" challenge.. You've done it great justice, Miss Steadfast...
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