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Savanna
New Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 6

0 posted 2001-08-01 05:35 PM

The sunset casts along the shore,
Two lovers walk into eternity forever more.
Their hearts have become one,on that peaceful night,
He gets down on one knee,knowing what he is doing is right.
Expressions of love are shown in tears,
"Will you be mine forever my sweet dear?"
He places the ring upon her hand,
She answers yes and they take a seat holding each other tightly in the soft sand.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-08-01 05:46 PM

Congratulations, Savanna...and thank you for sharing your first moment on that road with this lovely little poem. Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-08-01 06:04 PM

Wonderfully done, Savanna. Welcome to Passions!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-08-01 06:10 PM

very nice..and such a romantic picture painted...

welcome to passions!!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-08-01 06:28 PM

Welcome to Passions and keep writing!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-08-01 07:19 PM

sounds more to me like "The Answer to Life". . .

welcome!!! Please pull up a chair and stay awhile. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-08-01 07:32 PM

Very nice Savanna...James

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-08-01 08:40 PM

Happy poem to start off at Passions with. Welcome.
Sandra

blondeon
Junior Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 13

8 posted 2001-08-02 10:06 AM

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN , AND SO NICELY EXPRESSED! KEEP WRITING. HUGS!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-08-02 10:17 AM

Savanna,
Amen, Enjoyed and welcome.

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

10 posted 2001-08-02 12:24 PM

Welcome to passions!
This is great....Does that mean congratulations are in order too?
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

11 posted 2001-08-02 05:02 PM

You have expressed a beautiful moment...thank you for sharing it with us

And welcome to Passions!
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

12 posted 2001-08-02 05:29 PM

Welcome! This is a great visual of romantic love. I enjoyed! Bravo!

Love and peace Maggie ((~.~))

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2001-08-02 07:06 PM

Savanna~
Welcome to Passions !
I'm sure you will enjoy your stay~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

14 posted 2001-08-02 08:07 PM

Beautifully written and so romantic. Welcome!!!

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

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