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The art of Music #1: Prelude
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The art of Music #1: Prelude |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Prelude The doors fly open And before me lies A brightly lit room So bright with crystalline chandelliers Winking at me from above. The orchestra starts A prelude to begin The night of magic. A crowd gathers Onto the ballroom floor Each with a partner Hand in hand Swaying to the tune. It is a masquerade A mystery ball Full of mysterious suitors For each lady in the room. With masks donned Brightly decorated Intricately designed For one. And at the night's end The suitors may Or may not show themselves Or perhaps vanish With a kiss. But for now The night is young And they dance to the tune Of the prelude. -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, I like this one! Filled with mystery and intrigue. Very well done.  All writing comes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done..and sets the stage for sequels.. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Very cool poem...enjoyed! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
lovely!! will there be a second movement??? ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I believe so... Thank you all for your comments. Much appreciated.-Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
chasing rain - the following is precious for the two partners... The night of magic. A crowd gathers Onto the ballroom floor Each with a partner Hand in hand Swaying to the tune. You have captured the feelings, of dancing to the prelude... BC |
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