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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-07-30 03:22 PM


Shall my dreams
And
I

Be forgotten

A memory
In shadow die

Or

Be all
Enduring

Endless


Eternal


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)


"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-30 03:25 PM



Only if you write them down, or at the very least, act on them...

otherwise, how would we know?

I am enjoying very much your "20 or less"...

you always leave so much behind!

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-07-30 03:29 PM


Thank you, my Lady...  you're right.  I hope that what I "leave behind" is of "merit'...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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3 posted 2001-07-30 03:43 PM


nice piece Mark...

what is left of course is up to you..and how you embrace life and your actions on your dreams.... I have little doubt you will leave behind a lasting legacy

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-07-30 03:54 PM


Thank you for your faith, Ron...  I'd like to hope so.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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5 posted 2001-07-30 04:18 PM


I always think if someone misses me and cries for me I have done my part...James
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6 posted 2001-07-30 05:05 PM


Mark, your dreams are yours to recall, but you, you I will remember often through your words. Nice work. Dream on--write on.
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7 posted 2001-07-30 05:08 PM


Mark,
    So deeply expressed, and so many questions we all yearn to attain the answers to. Ah, "To sleep, per chance to dream"... Didn't some famous guy named Shakespeare say that?    
             Elise

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2001-07-30 05:38 PM


James -- good point, assuming you know that they do...

Constance -- that was a very sweet thing to say.  I suppose an artist's legacy is his art, so I shall continue dreaming and writing! (and composing!)

Elise:  the first step is to ask the question...  the second step is to listen for the answer...  the third step is to make a decision...  and the fourth step is to act on it!

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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9 posted 2001-07-30 06:19 PM


Very thought provoking. Something we all have to think about at some point. I know you will be remembered for many things, without doubt. And I have a feeling many of your dreams are going to come true as well.
Sandra

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10 posted 2001-07-30 08:03 PM


I will remember you. The 20 or less Guy that intrigued me so. I tell the children "When I'm dead and gone, you won't be able to eat an OREO without remembering me" I fight for my OREO's.  
Sincerely,
Regina

MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2001-07-31 10:19 PM


Sandra, thank you for the positive predictions.

Regina -- that's cute:  "The Twenty Or Less Guy"... :-)  (and that was just a recent departure and experiment for me...)  Thanks for your reply and sounds like you've got quite the tradition there with the Oreos!

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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