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The Pardon
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The Pardon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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perdition now I grant my soul absolution of this hold these chains I eagerly betrothed and donned as though they shined of gold-- [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-30-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Good to grant yourself the same mercy and understanding that you would another... Nicely done... and I hope the granting help you to find some comfort and peace.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Yes ! The gift you give yourself is a gift indeed ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is what we all need to do. . . the power of these words can do that. . . well done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
That's great. You are free. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity--This poem is simple and profound. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Then you have walked further down your pathway..very good...very gentle smile |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Well said sweet soul...you are the only one who can do it. Hugs, ~Krista |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Permission for oneself is the greatest gift, and you wrote it well. Reel beauty is only fin deep! |
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