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Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-07-12 03:00 PM

                     SERAAB
                        MIRAGE

Jo khubi hoti hey kissi say muhabat hamain
If we have fallen in any ones love
Hum kitaboon main gulaab chupanay lugtay hain
We begin to hide roses in the books

Muhabat ki ik umeed laga kar dil main
While having a pin hope of love in the heart
Hum zahan main ik khaab sjanay lugtay hain
We begin to decorate dreams in the mind

Uss nazuk badan ka tasawer kar key
After having an imagination of that soft body
Hum aankhoon main ik seraab bananay lugtay hain
We begin to make mirage in the eyes

Kubbi jo wo hotay hain dooer hum say Waseem
If ever she go away from us Waseem
Hum aankhoon say ik selaab bahanay lugtay hain
We begin to flow a flood from eyes

                       ~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-12 03:19 PM

oh, this is oh so true

you've written it well and simply with such tender touches

enjoyed!

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2001-07-12 03:27 PM

Quite heart rendering, and tenderly done.

Corinne

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-07-12 05:09 PM

"Uss nazuk badan ka tasawer kar key
After having an imagination of that soft body
Hum aankhoon main ik seraab bananay lugtay hain
We begin to make mirage in the eyes"

~Wasi

I love this part...nicely done!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-12 05:21 PM

Ah Waseem.. lovely write... reminds me of one I wrote called Bloody tears... perhaps one day I'll post it here..

I do enjoy the play of words... and perspective your poems add.

By the way... thanks for you r comments on my poetry. I tried to explain the one I wrote for RMW so I hope that helps!

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 07-12-2001).]

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

5 posted 2001-07-12 07:49 PM

Waseem ..is it love when I begin to hide your poems in my books ?.....nice poem,makes nice mirages for me.

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