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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-07-29 05:27 PM



In My Remember

~*Marge Tindal*~

In my remember there is a place
where softest dreams are kept
Inviting me to traipse among
recall of fragrant violet

Perfuming visions waft on breezes
blown in such gentle caress
Surround of fragrance in whiffs of you
with stir of memory I am blessed

Lacey handkerchief once worn
delicately arrayed upon lapel
Woman of graceful demeanor
scents from deepest well

Thoughtful gestures tucked away
by the hands of one who knew
That in my remember
I would need to plunder
fragrant thoughts of you~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-07-29 05:42 PM


This reminded me of my grandmother...are you sure we aren't somehow related?!   Sweet, tender and soooooo beautiful!!
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2 posted 2001-07-29 06:11 PM


Fragrant thoughts of you...I often associate certain smell with memories, this spells out a lovely way of saying so!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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3 posted 2001-07-29 06:56 PM



Oh Marge, large memories looming...thank you for this...

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4 posted 2001-07-29 07:01 PM


dang.....there go the tears.......making my heart ache.....soft Marge, delicate, and so loving..... today I needed this   thank you  
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5 posted 2001-07-29 07:54 PM


well done maiden mine
to conjure memories
of the past
thru the fragrances
of today
awesome~

Snooganzmeister32
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6 posted 2001-07-29 08:02 PM


That in my remember
I would need to plunder
fragrant thoughts of you~

Lovely, dear.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2001-07-29 08:45 PM




This is so softly wonderful and stirs memory ....perfumed memory.....

Lovely....

Thank you
******************

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8 posted 2001-07-29 08:56 PM


When all is said and done, the memories are all that we have..what a lovely one..very tender gentle smile for your thoughts and for the one remembered..hugs to you Marge for your tenderness
Suetang
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9 posted 2001-07-29 09:02 PM


Marge
This was so beautiful, I could almost smell the heavenly scent.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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10 posted 2001-07-30 02:47 AM


Denise~
Yep !  We are ... right at the heart~

AZBlond~
Thank you so much.

Karilea~
Sharing with caring~
*Hugs*

SEA~
*Hugs*
Well, lovie ... there's a scented kerchief to dry those tears.

SoaringEagle~
Thank you, my love.
Just knowing that you share my thoughts is such joy.

Rikki~
Thank you.
SEE !  Someone DID read your home page !

MyEnchantedMelody~
I appreciate your thoughts.

Logan~
Yes, love ... and so grateful that we have them.
*Hugs* for you.

SueTang~
Thank you, hon.
Memories are like that ... 'heavenly.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

vlraynes
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11 posted 2001-07-30 12:54 PM



Marge-
   Well, I'm finally here, and you already
   KNOW I love this beauty.
   So softly and and lovingly written...nobody
   'remembers' quite like yoo.
  
   love and hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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12 posted 2001-07-30 01:11 PM


Oh Marge, I miss my gramma so much--(she was "lily of the valley")thanks for helping my remember.
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13 posted 2001-07-30 04:44 PM


Teary eyed! with sighs hugs and love...
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14 posted 2001-07-30 07:29 PM


HEY!!!!!!!!!!!  I have a "Scarf" of remember!!!!!!!!!  Does that count?  Seriously my dear friend.  I loved this one and of course I love how you always so effortlessly voice the feelings you hold deep within you.  Now don't go turning that around on me, okay?  

gv ge yuhi!!!

Martie
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15 posted 2001-07-30 07:33 PM


Marge--What beautiful, lace edged thoughts.  You leave me with my own remember...thank you for that.
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16 posted 2001-07-30 07:36 PM


plunder not your thoughts
taste them as a fine liqueur
savoring nuance

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17 posted 2001-07-30 07:45 PM


A sweet scented reverie, worth keeping for all time! This one is tucked gently in my remember.
Sincerely,
Regina

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18 posted 2001-07-30 07:46 PM


Marge!
You have such a way with words!! loved it!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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19 posted 2001-07-30 08:05 PM



Marge, this is just so beautiful, oh how I love this one~

Melissa~

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20 posted 2001-07-30 08:25 PM


Vicky~
You are music to my heart.
Love n' hugs~

Constance~
It's so easy to draw on the essence of remember.
Thank you for letting me share.

Serenity~
And to you a *hug*.

Mark~
You didn't think I'd forget, did you ?
gv ge yuhi

Martie~
Softly remembering with you~
*Hugs*

InterLoper~
You pen such sweet replies.
Thank you.

RWood~
Thank you so much for enjoying the share.

Cindi~
This heart, this heart ... she remembers so well.
*Hugs*

Melissa~
You know that I appreciate you.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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21 posted 2001-07-30 10:40 PM


Oh Marge...this is beautiful.  You have stirred up memories for me with this one!  
Hugs,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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22 posted 2001-07-31 12:47 PM


Marge...I love this one!

I was fortunate enough to get all of my Grandma's handkerchiefs...I treasure them!

I agree with the other readers...thank you for putting into words what my perfumed memory will never forget.

Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2001-07-31 08:19 PM


SmittenKitten~
Thank you for letting me know it stirred memories for you.

Janette~
What a wonderous gift to have~
I am blessed with having those of my great grandmother and my mother.
Each held in tenderest fragrant recall.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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