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shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
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Michigan

0 posted 2001-07-29 10:14 AM



The character of a wise man
Reminds me of a tree in full bloom

Limbs like thoughts
Reach in all directions

Each leaf is like an idea explored

Each bud holds the promise
Of thoughts of the future

Each seed is a thought shared

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

© Copyright 2001 Daniel Owens - All Rights Reserved
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2001-07-29 11:02 AM


Short and Sweet just the way i like 'em.
I also like this idea..
Good Job!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

azblond
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
2 posted 2001-07-29 11:06 AM


Spread the seeds and live on forever!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-07-29 11:27 AM


lovely analogy!!
MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
4 posted 2001-07-29 04:46 PM


...and notice how the root system of a tree is so similar in form to its limbs, branches, and twigs -- one more validation to "As above, so below".  May wise men never be cut-down.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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