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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-07-12 11:28 AM

your memory burns
it's way across my night sky
illuminating.....

~*~

revealing my heart
discovering you're still there
enduring each beat

~SEA~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-12 11:29 AM

WOW!!! loved these!!!

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-07-12 11:30 AM

Oh, this one shall endure....

good write!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-07-12 11:31 AM

Stars from up above
Chasing love's pure devotion
Shine down on the "Sea"~

Oh girl you are on today!

If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-12 01:32 PM

ahhhh, lovely! SEA, you say such sweet things so very sweetly

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-07-12 02:47 PM

Eloquent elegance.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2001-07-12 02:50 PM

Like a shooting star. Loved this!

(((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

7 posted 2001-07-12 02:57 PM

SEA you always said beautiful..... I am fan of the way of your presentation.. Very beautiful

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-07-12 04:51 PM

SEA~

This one just sparkles
Illuminating - Indeed !
Sweet thoughts from you simply shine~

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

9 posted 2001-07-12 04:56 PM

This was very well put...Cindi

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

10 posted 2001-07-12 06:52 PM

Sea....sparkling. Bob

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2001-07-12 07:13 PM

Very pretty. Softly spoken.
Sandra

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

12 posted 2001-07-12 07:13 PM

SEA,
Brilliant, the standard is high.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

13 posted 2001-07-12 07:20 PM

~Memories shine on~
~Lingering with in hearts beat~
~In sweet harmony~

Lovely Senryu SEA, I really enjoyed it.

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 07-12-2001).]

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

14 posted 2001-07-12 08:09 PM

these are really beautiful haiku(my favourite) perfect in fact....ohhhhhhh

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2001-07-12 09:10 PM

Lovely work, SEA!!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2001-07-13 02:54 PM

Whoa, gal. You know I do luv 'em

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

17 posted 2001-07-13 04:19 PM

These illuminate indeed...beautifully done, SEA.

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