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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-07-27 06:39 PM


Pull Me In

Although the wind
has gone from my sail
and the glitter
has faded to pale
if ever you feel the need
to reach softly for my heart
I'm still waiting patiently
for your love to start.

Jameslee@July27,2001

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1 posted 2001-07-27 06:47 PM


"if ever you feel the need
to reach softly for my heart
I'm still waiting patiently
for your love to start."


oh James.........this is wonderful   you have the biggest heart.....

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-07-27 06:50 PM


Pursuing the horizon, James...  but who knows?  Maybe it can be "caught", if even for a moment...  just be sure to enjoy the pursuit...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Dulcinea
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IN
3 posted 2001-07-27 07:13 PM


I especially enjoyed this stanza,
"if ever you feel the need
to reach softly for my heart
I'm still waiting patiently
for your love to start."

Very lovely...hoping your patience reaps you the benefits you are seeking!  


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-07-28 03:58 AM


JamesMichael~
This is a lovely piece of your heart.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

Sven
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5 posted 2001-07-28 08:54 PM


James, hopefully, you won't have to wait much longer. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Samia
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Earth of corse!
6 posted 2001-07-28 08:58 PM


What a wonderful way to approach the world. I predict your heart will pull in much love.
-Samia

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