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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-12 10:21 AM


desirable thoughts
fond memories rekindled
passion unharnessed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-12 10:22 AM


nicely done Interloper... I enjoyed as usual...
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2 posted 2001-07-12 10:22 AM




oh my....

WhiteDragon
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3 posted 2001-07-12 10:23 AM


Hmm...like i've said before i'm not a big fan of Haiku...but i liked this one!  This wildfire is what got me into some problems.  Thanks for sharing, God BLess, Jeremy
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4 posted 2001-07-12 10:29 AM


I had just read how 4 lives were just lost in a wild fire in Washington while fighting it, so I wasn't quite expecting what I came into.  It works quite well for your intended use, though, just came in from a bad angle at first.

You certainly do senryus very well!!!

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5 posted 2001-07-14 01:25 AM


InterLoper~
This one sizzles~
I like !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-07-14 11:25 AM


"passion unharnessed"

now that is the center of this fire. . .

well done. . .

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