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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Let the clouds open up and swallow the earth Allow the mountains to crumble and dry up the seas This world could stop turning The sun might burn out None of that matters My smile won't falter Happiness can't fade When I'm in your arms And look into your eyes All that's gone wrong Is suddenly alright. ~I love you~ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Heya Jenn. Like I said to you before this is a really sweet piece of writing. The way you described the depths of your love through the willing destruction of the earth proves just how much you adore him. I hope you two find many hours of happiness. *coughs* lol  ~AF~ I'm a little teapot, short and stout! Here is my handle, here is my spout. *toot toot* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks Lizzy.  Always glad to hear your kind words. *hugs*  "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 08-28-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is so sweet. Weird how it's completely off the first page and with only one reply! Arrrg!  I did enjoy this one Jenn.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Awww this is so sweet...*Sigh* Excuse me while I go hang out in my jealous corner... *Pulls up a chair to make herself comfy* THIS is a perfect example of how love should be/feel like. Awesome write, Jenn. I loved it! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was great work Jenn. Really nice emotion and everything. keep it up! Regina |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awww Jen that was so sweet!!! Thanks for sharing this Im really glad that I read it...Brought a big smile to my face!! Keep up the good work!! "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Erin!!! Hiii!!  Thank you! "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
JENN, i loved this ..so far i think i have loved all of your work.. do me a favor and keep it up i love to read your work!!! !~Andrea~! |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hey this is great!!! I really liked this! I hope to see more.. thanks for sharing!! Always, Amanda If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ahhhhhhhhhhhh CUTE!!!!!...i KNOW you LOve me jenn..you dont have to tell the whole world about it !  i thought this was really sweet. i loved it lots! ............Daffodils |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
CHERISH!!!!??? How'd you know it was about you???   Hehe... anyway, thanks guys I'm so happy when you guys read my work. I'm even happier when you like it Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Jenn, that's the sweetest poems I've read lately. I'm glad you shared this Beautiful, simply beautiful Thanks for the awesome read Keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
What a sweet poem!! Genuine love It sounds like earth shattering, mountain moving kinda love thats just so amazing!! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem i really liked it!! keep up the good work. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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