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Teen Poetry #5

finding love

SunShine913

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since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-08-26 05:40 PM

I was lost and crying...

And so I rode,

Into the blinding darkness of my mindLike a knight in search of truth.

Holding my heart in hand,

Ready to giveWith my soul open to the twisting universe.

I searched for answers,

amongst the dirt and stars

_____

off the top me head !!

*You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun!

*gurls are sweet, Gurls are nice, but im the gurl with whip cream and ice

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2001-08-26 09:17 PM

Not bad! Not bad at all. Some of the best poems can come seemingly out of nowhere. I think there's a typing error in there, correct me if I am wrong.

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-08-27 11:45 AM

Very well done! From the top of yer head eh? Where else would a poem come from?

Anyhow, I really enjoyed this piece!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-08-27 04:56 PM

This is very impressive for being at the top of your head. Keep it up *appluads*

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

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