Teen Poetry #5 |
Confused by love..? |
Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
We have so much fun, and then he tells me I'm the one. And I don't know what to say, as I slowly back away. What's wrong with me? Why is it that I want to flee? Not from him, but from his words, fly away from them, like a flock of birds. Is it him that i'm afraid of? No, not him, just his love. In and out of it I fall, but when I'm with him, I want it all...... CONFUSED..... i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Just like that Alicia Keys song...You keep falling in and out of love with this person. Don't you hate it? I know how ya feel. It's frustrating. I enjoyed the poem. It had a really nice flow to it. Perhaps it's the commitment you are afraid of? Then again, the whole damn thing is pretty scary. There's nothing wrong with you at all. Thanks for the read. Hope to see more. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I hear you on this one. If it's not right don't get his hopes up and get with him out of pitty....hope this works out. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hehehe..it leaves you in the middle of nowhere doesnt it?..i liked this one lots im sure many of us have felt that way at some point in their lives- glad you were able to put it into words! ............Daffodils |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
maybe you want it but you're not really ready for it. Try taking it slow Thanks for sharing Keep em coming hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ah love...it's a really retarded thing. Too bad about the situation though. Think of what you'll have with/without him. If you can imagine yourself happy with him, then do it. If you don't, you'll be drowning yourself. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Oyyyyyyy!!!! Guys make things so difficult grrrrr!!! Hope you fix your confusion and figure out what will make you happy! |
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