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Terryloveiris_85
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since 2001-04-23
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The middle of nowhere

0 posted 2001-08-26 12:56 PM


We have so much fun,
and then he tells me I'm the one.
And I don't know what to say,
as  I slowly back away.

What's wrong with me?
Why is it that I want to flee?
Not from him, but from his words,
fly away from them, like a flock of birds.

Is it him that i'm afraid of?
No, not him, just his love.
In and out of it I fall,
but when I'm with him, I want it all......

CONFUSED.....

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

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Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
1 posted 2001-08-26 01:15 PM


Just like that Alicia Keys song...You keep falling in and out of love with this person. Don't you hate it? I know how ya feel. It's frustrating. I enjoyed the poem. It had a really nice flow to it. Perhaps it's the commitment you are afraid of? Then again, the whole damn thing is pretty scary. There's nothing wrong with you at all.   Thanks for the read. Hope to see more.  

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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2 posted 2001-09-04 12:26 PM


I hear you on this one. If it's not right don't get his hopes up and get with him out of pitty....hope this works out.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
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swimming in fairy floss...........
3 posted 2001-09-04 02:46 AM


hehehe..it leaves you in the middle of nowhere doesnt it?..i liked this one lots im sure many of us have felt that way at some point in their lives- glad you were able to put it into words!

............Daffodils
........Daffodils .....
....Daffodils..........
Daffodils .............

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Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-09-13 06:38 PM


maybe you want it but you're not really ready for it.  
Try taking it slow  
Thanks for sharing
Keep em coming

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

anonymousfemale
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Limbo
5 posted 2001-09-14 02:53 AM


Ah love...it's a really retarded thing.  

Too bad about the situation though. Think of what you'll have with/without him. If you can imagine yourself happy with him, then do it. If you don't, you'll be drowning yourself.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

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6 posted 2001-09-14 08:02 AM


Oyyyyyyy!!!! Guys make things so difficult grrrrr!!! Hope you fix your confusion and figure out what will make you happy!
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