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Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

0 posted 2001-08-25 02:21 PM

yes I have been going through a sorta "rough" time but it's ok, we all go through it. Eventually getting over it...I hope to make this my last "sad" post, and I hope you all enjoy

Falling:

Crazed, demented, talking no sense.
I live without existing
I breath dead air which surrounds me,
Falling into an empty pocket
with no end to fall to
I just keep falling
as it all passes by.
Trying to graps an image
which slips form my hand
Must I go this way forever
Or will something eventually break my fall.

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

1 posted 2001-08-25 02:30 PM

emotional insperation, good choice to use to write, good job

Only darkness falls on those without souls

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-08-25 02:54 PM

I dont believe I have ever read any of your poetry, but I truly enjoyed this. It was kinda sad, but good all the same. I cant wait to see more!

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-08-25 10:10 PM

Oh Heaven's Tears, you should go look his stuff up- You'd enjoy it bunches...Ecspecially the farting smilies. LMAO
ANYWAY!
Yet again, loved the poem here. Very Nicely done. You expressed yourself well. don't you just hate those damn rough times? Grrr...But Hey- They always make for the best poetry in my opinion. Happy ones are just not realistic. LOL. (Okay, maybe a few...)
Anyway, hope to see more...sad, happy...who cares- just more!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Crash&Burn
Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 119

4 posted 2001-08-28 06:00 PM

thanx for reading guys
I wrote this one a while ago and I've been going through "one of those times" lol
Anyways yeah I'm all better, or at least I think I am
thanx for reading

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-09-01 03:25 AM

Yea, "one of those times".....just make sure you keep that head up high and you don't go about putting yourself in lame situations. Well done on the poem jorge and I hope you get happy soon.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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