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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-08-24 02:57 PM

The time has come for me to go now,
Money and space doesn't yet allow.
The letter you wrote made me cry,
All of a sudden I'm the one who's shy.
Knowing I'm part of all you need,
I'm just glad you had that moment of greed.
Everlasting smile spreads across my face,
So full of elegance and grace.
Trying to catch a glimpse of you under the moon,
Together again we'll be one day soon.
Leaving you isn't even fair,
Going to sit in my room in dispare.
All the while waiting for the day,
Just waiting to hear you say.
"It's time to come home now."
And wait for that day I shall,
This to you I do vow.
no me and my girlfriend didnt break up, i gotta go back to missouri for awhile thats what its bout

Only darkness falls on those without souls

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-08-24 07:49 PM

Awww...I liked the ending. Sweet write.
Sorry you have to leave her though...Thats gotta bite. But it's all okay cause you'll see her soon, Right? Right. Well done on the poem. I enjoyed it bunches.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2001-08-24 08:51 PM

Aww MAN! That really sux that you need to leave the one you love. I think I can sympathize, though. I am moving to florida, and only now am I realizing just how much I mean to certain people, and how much they mean to me. Good write, I really do feel what u are going thru.

Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-08-25 06:44 PM

I really thought you wrote this well. I really enjoyed the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-08-25 07:07 PM

This was sad but very well written..im glad you hear that you and your gf are still together...

Good job!

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

5 posted 2001-08-26 12:28 PM

For a minute there I thought we were losing yet another poet, but I am hoping that you will rejoin us in Missouri. This is a tough situation, having to leave someone you love so much. I hope that everything works out for you.

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