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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
If I could see your face again With your gleaming smile that never left your face I'd be so happy Your smile never did leave until the day you died But all until there it stayed on your face You meant the a lot to me When you’d make me laugh with your jokes When you make me mad because you wanted me to walk When you loved me until the very end I still think of that love between us How we’d spend hours talking about thing that bugged us I still wish I had you around to help me when I’m sad but I have friends now who do that But the most thing I liked in you was your attitude toward everything in life I always wanted your kind of attitude but I never got it until you died Now I have a awesome attitude thanks to you Love,  Minna Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a beautiful poem, Minna. The thoughts behind the poetry are very emotional. Very sad poem... Hold those memories close to you. You will cherish them more than ever in the future. Nice work. I really enjoyed this. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This is such an awsome poem because I can totally relate to everything you are saying in it.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
heartfelt poem  ...very beautiful...enjoyed by me...bye Minna..  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very touching Minna. You always capture the most amazing emotions in your pieces. Thank you for this. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Touching is write I need a tissue... -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
you see i have a disability and i didn't have a good attitude and I always wanted one like my dads because it wasn't as good. but now its so awesome minna Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
That was really sad, but Im glad you got something good out of the loss of someone special. Great poem! *Amanda* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a very emotional poem. I liked it a lot Minna. You are a very strong person.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your poems are very heart felt Minna All I can say is close your eyes and you'll see you father's smile again. It's still there, you'll see hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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