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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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I found that I had no soul just an empty body was all that was left when you come to see the little that is left, will you scream? am i fading away forgotten? Is my skin transparent yet? maybe in this dim fate I could be set free! can you come rescue me from my tragic fate? Regina M.A. Levy |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The style was pretty straight forward. More like just you talking. I hope you get what you want  Good luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
girl are you depressed bout somethin? cus if ya need someone to talk to i'm here. great poem btw. robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was awesome.. very deep. You have a way with words, that taps into the emotional side of every reader. That's impressive... I really liked this. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice job, Regi. Short but sweet which is a lot like your other pieces. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
VERY emotional yet deep...i really liked it, Ina ...the tone of this piece was just awesome.if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
Very cool poem. I liked this alot "maybe in this dim fate I could be set free! can you come rescue me from my tragic fate?"  Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ina, you know I'm here to talk to  your poems make me sad, i feel so bad now It's not pity I'm giving you I just ahte to see others hurt and suffer Hope things do get better *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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