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Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2001-08-06 07:13 PM

You're right when you say,
I don't care for you anymore.
Those words are meaningless
for all they are for.

~ ~ ~

I will not falter,
or tell a lie
an underestimation of this love
would blind your eye

~ ~ ~

I will not go on pretending
that I don't see it in your tears.
But I just cannot say the words
which for so long I have feared.

~ ~ ~

Everything I want you have
an acceptance of my love,
you were sentenced to my heart
and damned from all above.

~ ~ ~

I do not care for you.
I would kill for you.
I would die for you.
I love you.

*Inspired by Matt, the one I love*

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

[This message has been edited by Kicking Kim (edited 08-06-2001).]

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-08-06 11:54 PM

Awww...very sweet write.
I liked the ending bunches.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

2 posted 2001-08-07 03:14 AM

"I do not care for you.
I would kill for you.
I would die for you.
I love you."

Wow... you write with such passion and strength... I can tell how much you love this person from this one post... and thats Great...

I really loved this... Great great post,

ALLIE

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-08-07 03:17 AM

I saw the title and i knew i had to read it and im so glad i did because this had such strong and powerful emotions!!! THIS ROCKED!!! Amazing job and you put a lotta strong emotion into this...nice job!

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-08-07 03:41 AM

I have to agree the title caught my eye. This was really great. So filled with emotion and written with such passion. I was really feeling you on this one. Thanks for sharing.
~Nikki~

Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-08-08 01:05 AM

I thought this was nice Kim. Very well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-08-08 02:07 AM

Nicely done, Kim! I really enjoyed this one...
"I will not go on pretending
that I don't see it in your tears.
But I just cannot say the words
which for so long I have feared."
That was my favorite stanza. Powerful write... I hope to see more soon. So keep posting all your work.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2001-08-08 03:03 AM

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robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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