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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Okay, I lied. THIS is the last poem I'm going to post here... I'm going out to Holland... And then maybe to Spain... And perhaps even Australia... To see the paper cranes... Wait, that's in Japan... Maybe I'll head off to England... Or perhaps I'll go to France... Maybe I'll go to Russia And learn how to dance.  P-tuh...yeah right. Maybe I'll go to China... And walk along the Wall... Or maybe go to Austria... And attend a royal ball.. Nah. I think I'll go to Mexico... Or maybe even Peru Of course I'll remember To send a post card to you. =========== This was originally my email to a friend who asked where I'm going for vacation. hehe. The flow isn't great, but you know...gotta give me credit for trying. Have a great summer everyone!  TLMF, Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 06-28-2001).] |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Are you leaving for good, or just for the summer? We will miss you and your poetry if you leave!!! *Amanda* |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
GOOD STUFF LOL CUTE I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LEAH! hehe.. this is so cute. The flow is actually very good!  Nice work. Creatively done.Oh, and I'll forgive you for lying this time.. just don't let it happen again! --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Cool pem I really hope this isn't really the last one you'll post. Lauren |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very creative indeed...i liked it lots...cute as well...but sad to hear that you will be gone  ...are you really?...if you are take care of yourslef..k?...alright...and access in some foriegn country and log on.. LOL ...hope you do..bye LEAh..  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
So cute, Leah!! That would make a great greeting card Also, don't stop posting forever!! I'm going to be on sebatical for the summer, too, but we better see more of you afterwards!!"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Hehe...Leah the line about the paper cranes in Japan really made me smile. Make sure you have fun now. Send me a post card damnit! ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
cute |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I guess I confused some people, hehe. Oops.  I'm just going away for the summer...nothing big or fancy. I'll try to log on somewhere, but I doubt I'll be able to find a computer. So, this is my...happy summer poem. I'll be back. Don't worry... I'll bring back tans for everyone! TLMF, Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot. It's a very fun poem. I liked it. Very nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
do me a fave...go to England...and take me with you lol, anyway, this is very nicely done!! bye bye LEE-UH -->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I love it. I still don't know where you're going for vacation though. Unless this poem tells us that you're going in all of em. Must be nice keep sharing Leah hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
ONLY the summer?! Phew... |
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