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The Love
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The Love |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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The love I endure, When I know your here, The feeling inside, I want to curl up and hide inside. The vision I see, Me and u under a Tree, Kissing, hugging, talking and such, I faint from your gentle touch. The way you look into my eyes, Makes me not want to hide, The way you put your hand in mine, Made me feel like the world is mine. I look around and I only see you, You came into this world a gentle being, I will please you as much as I can, In return ill ask for your hand. One day we will be, All tidy and clean, Down the isle, Soon to meet me. The words will come but I'll be scared, When I feel your hand there goes the fear, Then the words come and I'll finally say, Will you be mine untill our last dying day. BAAAAAAAAABOOOM! There you go ive got it back if not about love then u can take it back ive got my poetry, my family and my friends even that special touch that once came to an end ill be back with plenty more enjoy now and ill show u more. All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this one Branden......I got your love!  Nice poem  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thanks dope ive kinda got the touch back a lil and its getting stronger each day. All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I like this one, Branden! Very nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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