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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2001-08-02 04:24 AM

you left me out in the cold.

starving for your love.
but did i get any love?

no you just left me there.

now what am i supposed to do?

i scream but you do not hear me.
i cry but you do not hold me.

i hurt but you do not mend.

i forgive you for forgetting me.

i forgive you for not loving me.
i forgive you.

all i want to know is why,

why you left me?

why you never loved me?

why you did not hear me?

why you did not hold me?

why you did not mend me?

Robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2001-08-02 04:34 AM

hey sorry bout goin crazy with the crybaby faces but i think it looks god hope ya like it.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

2 posted 2001-08-02 09:07 AM

Hey,

Well, the poem itself we well-writen but the crying faces basicly brough it down for me. I don't know I think I would have enjoyed it a bit more without having all these crying things looking in my face. Its kind of destracting when you are trying to read the poem. Other wise it was great, until your next poem

-- Linc

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Low Man's Lyric
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 236
In a dream

3 posted 2001-08-02 11:02 AM

Thats ok Robin, the smiley faces don't look like god (<---typo?)

. Lol, anyway your poem was a sad but good poem and those sad faces enhanced that mood. 'till your next.

"Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before."
~Steven Wright

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

4 posted 2001-08-02 07:35 PM

Very sad piece here...I thought it was very well written and emotion filled. Thanks for sharing!!
~Nikki~

Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it...

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

5 posted 2001-08-02 11:31 PM

Very emotional... This was awesome! I liked it alot!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-08-03 06:30 PM

Aww *hugs* this was so sad. I hope things get better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2001-08-03 11:37 PM

tks javi! and hun if you get on icq anytime soon i need someone to talk to.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-08-04 11:34 PM

Aww... *hug* I'm sorry this happened.. Give it time

Nicely done on the poem, I enjoyed this one.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

bOoGaSuGa
Member

since 2001-08-03

Posts 54

9 posted 2001-08-04 11:40 PM

is my pic working? its not of me but its close enough lol.
robin you need to get on msn so we can write a poem again!!!

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

10 posted 2001-08-04 11:52 PM

This was very sad!! Nice way to share your feelings!!!
   Always,
      Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

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