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Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

0 posted 2001-07-31 04:41 AM

Do you ever think about me
Like the way I do you?
I saw you just the other day
You smiled and waved

Smiled like you used to
Before you caused me all this pain
Could you see the hurt in my eyes?
All the tears I have cried?

My friends just pulled me away
All I could do was stare
They were afraid of what I might say
But would you even care?

Its been almost two whole months
Since you last walked out my door
I found about the other girl
I told you it was over
All you did was shrug your shoulders

Nine months…all that time…you never even cared?
Did you really feel nothing when I said goodbye?
After our hearts, bodies and souls we shared
You went on with your life, while all I did was cry

I think that’s what hurts the most
That I am not missed
To know I meant nothing
And to you not even worth truly loving

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

[This message has been edited by Shygirl82 (edited 07-31-2001).]

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-07-31 04:53 AM

WoW! this is very powerful! really! the last stanza ended this well-written piec perfectly! I envy you now haha VERY AWESOME!!!!!!

"Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

2 posted 2001-07-31 01:50 PM

You ever read a poem and think you could have wrote it because you identify with it so well....i felt like these were my words..and sometimes these are the hardest to write...

Congrats on a great one here

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2001-07-31 03:35 PM

you make me want to cry.
this is the way part of my life is.
I don't want to let go
if I don't know if i'll be missed.
But I'm not gonna let him put my dating life on hold.
Nuh-uh. There's lots of good fish in the sea,
I just need to get out my fishing pole.

Anyways, I'm nutty, but this is an AWESOME poem!

library piece.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

4 posted 2001-07-31 05:54 PM

Smiled like you used to
Before you caused me all this pain
Could you see the hurt in my eyes?
All the tears I have cried?

Awesome stanza, heck, it was an awesome poem!!

hehe I really enjoyed it!

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-07-31 06:55 PM

I dunno- The rhyme or flow or somehting was off in a few spots... But the poem- Wow! I loved it. The meaning was awesome. I totally agree with you- that hurts more than anything. And gotta thank those friends that pull you away like that...Smart friends. Anyway- I liked this ALOT. More I say! More!

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

6 posted 2001-07-31 09:07 PM

Hey this peice was awesome!!! I loved it!! I really hope to read more too!!  ~K~
         Always,
           Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

7 posted 2001-07-31 09:31 PM

im with my sis she is right on the dot!

"I have no never-again, I have no always"
Pablo Nerudo

thedragonthomas
Junior Member

since 2001-07-30

Posts 15

8 posted 2001-07-31 10:38 PM

very sad indeed, i feel for you because i know how it feels.

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

9 posted 2001-07-31 11:32 PM

Guys...I know the scheme of this one really sucks...but I saw my ex the other day and for some reason I just had to get these thoughts out...Thanks for replying

~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

10 posted 2001-08-01 02:29 AM

strong emotions...powerful yet sad...tough situation...hope things are better.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take

Low Man's Lyric
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 236
In a dream

11 posted 2001-08-01 03:51 AM

Such a beautiful and yet powerful poem, I really enjoyed the read.

"Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before."
~Steven Wright

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

12 posted 2001-08-01 06:29 PM

This is soo cute. I like this one.. I hope to see more!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

13 posted 2001-08-03 05:00 PM

Well done here, quite the sad poem. I surely hope all goes well soon.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

14 posted 2001-08-04 05:17 AM

Good poem, but I spare you from the long reply. I've said it all before. Great image here. I like it alot!

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*
*I have this theory that if were told we're bad. Then that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe i

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

15 posted 2001-08-05 12:33 PM

Very strong poem here. I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing

I hope to see more... soon!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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