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lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2001-07-29 10:47 PM

All alone not a soul but me
All alone invisable to see

Friends what friends? it's all so fake
Without even thinking my trust you take

All alone is all I'll be
All alone helpless me

Friends come and friends go
If you ask me if i have a friend, my anwser is no

It's like I have people watching constintly
them wanting me to be someone i'll never be

Wating for that friend to tell me it's okay
Waitng for that friend,Hoping it's today

Starting to give up just like I was before
I thought I said I wouldn't do this anymore?

Im thinking of giving up, thinking what should I do?
I want to start off a new life, start brand new

So many regrets so many mistakes I made
My life slips away gently starting to fade

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-30 12:40 PM

"Friends what friends? it's all so fake
Without even thinking my trust you take"

I liked this- The beginning is bitter...and the end shows more of the pain you feel...Wonderful write- you expressed yourself very well!

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2001-07-30 12:43 PM

It's like I have people watching constintly
them wanting me to be someone i'll never be

^ Favorite lines...

I know how you feel all to well. Great piece!!

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-30 01:10 AM

I liked the poem. Well done on this one! Nice to see you posting. Hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-08-04 02:01 AM

I really liked this... but I hope you're not turning to a self destructive way out. You have more people out there who care than you may think. Stay strong. Keep your head up... take care.

"So many regrets so many mistakes I made
My life slips away gently starting to fade"

I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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