Anonymous Albert(a): Acrostic - Down the road and into the river

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Anonymous Albert(a): Acrostic - Down the road and into the river

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

0 posted 2001-07-29 04:16 PM

Away I go down concrete road
Never thought I'd turn away
Oh,this feeling is so strong, but
Nothing's there, I say.
Yet somehow in my darkened mind
Mostly full of moons and stars
Out comes all my thoughts and deeds
Under rays of broken scars.
Somehow every move I make
Allows the thoughts of murky wrong
Lead by stone, my heart is still
Beating to this song.
Evening sleeps, morning wakes
Rivers cold and flowing.
Take me to the land above

And I will be there rowing.

Haha...

Alby, I told you I'd do a poem for you.

Let's just see if it makes any sense...

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

1 posted 2001-07-29 04:17 PM

I had to add an extra "A" at the end cuz I ran out of letters...

hehe.

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-07-29 04:22 PM

AWESOME!

I really liked this.....an acrostic is hard enough, but to have one ryhme and have awesome flow then hey you win the prize!
I really liked this one. Amazing job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-07-29 10:19 PM

hehe

...you made my day..lol....and i loved it!...more then words can say?...the meaning behind it truly intrigues me...as you did a amazing job writing on this so-hard format...with ryms, tOo..

..and your sOo awesome to do such a thing, for me..

...hehe...thanks you thank you thank you, my friend..

...bye Leah

p.s..the acrostic spells out "anonymous alberta"..

...hehe..you know you did that on purpose..

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-08-04 01:54 AM

Awww! You made Alby's day!!

This was awesome, Leah! I'm sure it meaned a lot to Alberta. Nicely done... I liked the way you added the A on the end there

THis was just awesome.. I'm impressed!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-08-04 08:15 AM

Hey, Hey!

This is so damn good, Leah. Twice as good because it was about Albert.

haha..enough of that crap. Now seriously, that extra A at the end did something really good to it. If I could tell you what it was, you'd get a better reply. But hey! When you're in desperate need of something alcoholic, you'll only get a semi decent reply.

Well done, Deejay. You've done the world proud.

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

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