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Teen Poetry #5

Things I can't explain

Neveah
New Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 5

0 posted 2001-07-27 08:24 PM

I sit in my room
And try to explain
How my love for you
Is a never-ending flame.
How I cant get you out of my head
And it always seems,
That even when I am sleeping
You are in my dreams.
I become dazed
By your gentle touch
And when you are not there
How I miss you so much
How you look at me
With that twinkle in your eye
Like the twinkle in the stars
That burns bright up so high
I can sit here all alone in my room
And try to explain
But my words can’t explain
My love for you

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-28 01:05 AM

Yep, Neveah. I know those feelings.
You expressed yrouself well.
Thanks for the read.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-07-28 01:59 AM

this is soo sweet..i love this...often you cant explain what a person is feeling inside..and even trying to label them as being certain emotion is hard as well...this is a nice poem by you..i enjoyed it a lot..thanks for sharing..

"Killer in me is a killer in you, my love
Send a smile over to you"
Disarm
Smashing Pumkins

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-29 12:33 PM

I really enjoyed this one! I think you wrote this to be quite sweet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

levon6618
Junior Member

since 2001-07-29

Posts 10

4 posted 2001-07-29 01:29 PM

I can relate to your poem. I also find myself sitting in my room trying to explain my love for my significant other. Good read.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-08-04 12:35 PM

I relate to this one.. only in my situation, I can't have "my love". This was very well written... sweet! I enjoyed it

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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