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Let Go? |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL 
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How do you let go Of something you can't grasp When do you realize Nothing really last How do you see the truth Of something seeming pure and sweet Only discovering It's leading to a firey heat The outside mask Is always better before you see The on-going doubt That lives inside me What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
The rhyming was a bit off- but yet it worked. Anyway- I liked this alot Jessica. Hope to see you in Teen a bit more. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
How do you let go Of something you can't grasp wonderful lines, Really drew me in... enjoyed the poem a lot ALLIE |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Hey Jessica, This wasn't my favorite by you..it was pretty good though. I can definitely relate to "How do let go of something you can't grasp." And nothing lasts forever...but that's what can make it a good thing. Cherish the good moments you've got..cuz life's a constant cycle, and sooner or later, everyone's bound to hit a rut in the road. I can be hard when you think you know someone, only to find out they aren't what they seem. I know from first hand experience. I've only got one question...what..do you doubt? -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. Short and nicely written. Grea job on it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really liked the first two lines of this... it really caught my eye. I enjoyed this piece, Jessica. It's not the best I've seen from you, but still a pretty good read  Nice work.--Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
I really liked it. Will have to agree with everyone on the first two lines, they're wonderful. Looking forward to reading more from you. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Jessica --- whatever is troubling you this time, you know I'll be here to talk to. I am a good friend ya know. Your poem is so emotional that it got me a little concerned. Hope things are ok for you. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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