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Starnite
Junior Member

since 2001-07-05

Posts 41
Wisconsin

0 posted 2001-07-23 10:41 AM

Trust

I have lots of trust
But when it comes to you,
I don't know if I can trust you.
You may trust me,
Cause I won't play you
I don't know if you will be playing me.
I can and will trust you
But if I get a feelin'
That you be playin' me,
I will say good bye

It's about what happened to me. I was with this guy and he decided to play me with two of my friends.

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

1 posted 2001-07-23 11:47 AM

hmmm how much trust can you have in one person?? Keep me guessing why don't ya. The answer i asume is in the words you've written. keep it vast and explore this. I feel you can get much more off this subject. /Nick/

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-24 12:11 PM

Hmm- This is a prime example as to why I don't trust people. HeHe.
Ya- You oculd most definetly extend this one. Give it a try. I like it though.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-24 04:36 AM

I hardly trust anybody due to this.....the poem was really out there. Well done on writing it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

4 posted 2001-07-24 04:58 AM

i'd make this a little bit longer,
but i liked it a lot...
if you do make it longer make sure you show us all the extended version...

ALLIE

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-07-28 07:47 PM

It's hard to gain trust for anybody after somethign like this happens. I'm sorry someone felt like they could mess with your heart like this. It's never right. I hope you feel better.
This poemw as well written... I enjoyed it!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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