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Teen Poetry #5

a storm they made

tzaddiqim
Junior Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 15

0 posted 2002-03-03 02:51 PM

What’s happening to me?
Every day its get worse
The cloud gets darker
The rain comes in
Blurs my vision

How can you do this two me?
Both of you, I held so close
But now how will I trust you again?
How can you look me in the eye?
My closest friend, my greatest love

You have caused damage you can’t understand
It’s wrong, for you that knew me best to do this
In secrete you scurry around, rats!
How can you conspire to hurt me so?

When I have shown nothing but love
And friendship.
Traitors.
Thunder drowns my thoughts
Lightning illuminates my revenge

But the storm will pass.
And I will weather the storm
No one can ever take away my hope
One setback
But fate will be on my side

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-03-03 03:07 PM

After the storm, and everythin is destroyed, it gives people the chance to start over...Remember that

And great poem, great emotion, I hope th storm leaves you well and soon...

~LCBS

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2002-03-03 04:32 PM

I know what it feels like to have a friend betray you with someone you love, I hope you are ok. Thank you for sharing this poem with us I really enjoyed the read.

Zu

See this through and leave my friend, the tears will come and I will end.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-03-03 10:42 PM

Oh wow...the kinda thing happened to me...absolutely ruined my life for a big period of time! ::hugs:: Nicely written

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

4 posted 2002-03-04 02:15 PM

Wow this was great, i totally loved it, i could relate to it entirely

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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