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Starnite
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since 2001-07-05
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Wisconsin

0 posted 2001-07-18 06:50 PM


Friends

I've had many friends in my 14 years
A bunch in Grafton
At 6 that changed...my parents got divorced
I moved with my mom
I had left all my friends in Grafton
To start over in West Allis
I met 2 wonderful people:
Bobby and Jessica
I loved them to death
Bobby was like a brother and Jesse was a sister
Over those 4 years I met friends
Then I moved again
Even though it was only 5 blocks
I missed all my friends
Now I am fond of all my friends here
I still keep in touch with everyone from my old neighborhood
I miss them dearly
Bobby and Jesse I still love you
Even though I don't know where you are
To everyone else it's great knowing you
I love you all and will remember you all.

© Copyright 2001 Sarah - All Rights Reserved
CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA
1 posted 2001-07-18 07:34 PM


aww, I liked this.  Great tribute to your friends.  It's great to have friends that love you and friends to love.  This was a great post, I enjoyed it.  Good job!

      - Cody -

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If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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2 posted 2001-07-19 01:56 AM


i liked the poem...very nice tribute to your friends...enjoyed the read..and hope it stays that way

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3 posted 2001-07-19 08:47 PM


This is a very sweet tribute to your two friends, Sarah.  It's hard to move and have to leave your friends, no matter what distance.  I liked this poem   Keep posting all your work.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-07-23 11:45 PM


Well done here. I thought it was nice.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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