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Pollita
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the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-09-02 05:56 PM



Perfect, i'm not!
I'm clumbsy and perky.
You seem to think i'm smart,
But truely i'm not.

You look up to me like i'm an idol.
You think im so cool,
I don't agree with you because,
I'd be lying to you and everyone else.

Just face it,
It's the truth.
I'll never be anyone important.
It's just not mean't to be.

Why do you think i'm perfect?
It's weird because I can't see,
Why anyone would want to be,
Someone like me!

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1 posted 2002-09-03 08:39 PM


I remember feeling this very exact way for a very long amount of time. Its almost inconceivable to think someone would want to be anything remotely close to you...but yet they do. We judge ourselfes too hard and see our faults too clearly. I dont know why.

I liked your poem..very true.

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

[This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (09-03-2002 08:41 PM).]

Pollita
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since 2002-07-25
Posts 220
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2 posted 2002-09-05 07:38 PM


Aww thank you!!!!!!!!!!...
well ya...i see my faults way too clearly...
I hate myself...my sister krista hates me...And my friend alex is mad at me...or i think he is...so im almost about to cry...LiKE IT WAS SO BAD...LIKE A FEW WEEKS AGO I WAS wishing i was dead...Lol...i guess thats sorta imature but thats how i felt!...
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