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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
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I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-08-20 09:13 PM



I always need but never lend a helping hand.
I always need a little more than I can have.
I always have to be a little more than I am.
I always have to take more than what I give in.
I always take more than I can stand!

EITHER WAY. YOU'LL NEVER EVER LET ME SHOW...
EXACTLY WHO I AM.

I KNOWTHERE SO MUCH MORE TO ME THAN...
YOU COULD UNDERSTAND.

HOW DO I TAKE ON THE MOSTER THAT I AM?!?

"Paint your perfect day, I don't mind this. I'm better off by the way - Deeply grounded... You will get yours yours."
-Bush (*cold contagious*)

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Smiles and Cries
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since 2002-08-23
Posts 16
Newrk De
1 posted 2002-08-25 02:11 PM


oooh i like, i like... we are our own worst enemies huh?

Have u ever Loved somebody so much it makes u cry? Have u ever needed something so bad u cant sleep at night? Have u ever tried to find the words but

Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109

2 posted 2002-08-25 11:41 PM


I sort of didn't understand the first part together with the middle, then the last line made it all clear. I like. Very much! Maybe just because I think of myself that way sometimes.
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2002-08-26 12:28 PM


this reminds me of a bad religion song. Kyoto Now!

"Dont allow this mythologic hopeful monster to exact its price. Kyoto Now! We cant do nothing and think someone else will make it right in your dreams you saw a sadly state a bounty for eternity silent screams but now the wisdom that sustains us is a full retreat

ALIEN

we need a fresh and new religion to run our lives,

hand in hand,

the arid torpor of inaction will be our demise

Life is a lonely journey to, and a heavy-hearted departure from three words. I LOVE YOU

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