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StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-08-19 12:07 PM

Longing for something,
You may know what it is,
Though, that's not the question at hand,
I just want to know this:
Can you give me what I need?
As cliche as that may sound,
Please, tonight, just let me know,
Maybe I've finally grown tired,
Tired of waiting and being patient,
But I know I'm not fooling you,
Or anyone else for that matter,
You know very well that I'll wait,
Wait for you to say the word,
Then I'll know what your intentions are,
I'm not sure if we'll make it,
I might end up completely breaking down,
And now I'm really tired,
You tell me you're the reason I fall asleep at night,
My subconscious is forcing these dreams on me,
I'll give into them of course,
And go to sleep early again tonight,
So I can meet you there,
Then I'll wake up alone,
And I know I won't be able to get back to sleep,
In conclusion,
You're the reason I fall asleep,
And the reason I lie awake in the middle of the night,
Oh, also, before I go,
I'd just like to add,
That I'm still waiting for an answer,
That is, if you even remember the question.

Hmm..I'm not sure where this came from. I just started writing and ended up with this.

Thanks for reading.

"I've got nothing left to hide except for what's inside. I keep it all locked up in this prison we call love."-Sugarcult

[This message has been edited by StellarChica (08-19-2002 12:11 AM).]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-08-19 12:56 PM

Hmm, not bad at all. Just a question: Is this sentence "You tell me you're the reason I fall asleep at night" true?

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

2 posted 2002-08-19 01:29 AM

First off, thanks for the compliment. Second, yes it is true well he didn't say that exactly. I said to him that I was tired and I didn't know why and he said that it was because I couldn't be with him and that my mind just wanted me to go to sleep and dream about him.

Thanks again.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2002-08-19 01:46 PM

I really liked this and the whole concept of "meeting" in dreams was really awesome. Without any specific form or rhyme, this was great!!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

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