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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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This is one that I just recently turned from Prose to Poem form. Anyway,I don't have much to say about this one, so here it is. Let me know what you think.  DEAR GIRL: Girl, I don't know where you may be Nor do I even know who you are You may be somewhere close to me Or you may be away quite far I will never be perfect And I will always have my flaws As do you, I can only expect Our hearts uniting God will cause Girl, I know we're alread in love God has not brought us together yet Soon our lives will fit like a glove However, I suppose maybe we already met Will our love come at first sight? Or will we have to take time to decide Until then, I will search with all my might And one day you will be my bride Girl, what might your first name be? That I only wish that I could know Are you really and truly in love with me? I guess I shall stop and let the love grow I hope that someday our hearts will unite Until then, I suppose I should sit back and relax I bet you're right under my nose, just out of sight One day I will know all these facts Love, Cody - Cody - If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!! If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid? [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 07-15-2001).] |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Aw...this is so cute! Beautiful poem, I think it is great, I love it. Keep it up. Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Cody... This was really good!! Seriously, i loved it!! Dear girl...i liked how you left that open. Or is there a girl that this is for??? hmmmmmmmmmmm.. Well i enjoyed this read a lot, keep up the good work Cody  Till next time  ~Jeff~ |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Cody, that was awesome! You've inspired me! I always write Justin these letters, but I never thought about turning them into poems until now. Anyways, until the next poem, keep up the good work! You're awesome!~  Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Cody~ This poem is truly magnificent. You captured my thoughts as if they were coming directly from my heart. It's hard to be single sometimes just thinkin that someday you will meet. We must be patient because that one day will come when we are united with the match of our lives. Our soulmates. And when it does happen, it will be forever. And as it's always said good things come to those who wait. Wonderful poem and quite original too. Thanks for sharing.*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
I love this! It's something that I've thought of alot. I always wonder where I'll find the person I'll always be with... This poem also made me think of my weeks at the Walkersville carnival, where i met my current boyfriend. Wonderfull THoughts, Cody!!~ Tamma "A friend's shoulder makes a |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
awww, I love you too Cody  haha, anyway, I like this poem. it's really great. and yer still young, don't look for the girl yer gonna marry just yet. look for the girl you are really into and really like. and don't go for a girl just cuz you think you can live with her...but rather go for a girl you think you can't live without (just a little advice I felt compelled to share)I wish you the best of luck I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwww this was really nice Cody. I liked this one a lot and wish you the best luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is sooo sweet, Cody!! Is this about the girl who's taken but is flirting with you at the same time? Well, whatever, I relaly liked this. Good luck with the girl! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Cody, this is so nice. You've become such a great writer. Thanks for sharing this. ~AF~ Tearless grief bleeds inwardly. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
Really sweet, i always wish someone would write something like this for me... lol shes one lucky girl to already have poetry about her... nice post ALLIE |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is really sweet and I really liked it keep up the awsome work and I can't wait to read more of your poems. Lauren |
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Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
Aww it was sweet. I really haven't read any of your posts but if this one great it think I will start reading some others. Keep them comin'. **Sarah |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
hmmm to think that there is someone out there for us all is a joyous thing. makes me think some, I'll ponder this for awhile. i hope there's many more writings like this, i'll look forward to them... /Nick/ |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....*hugs*....i enjoyed reading this one from you cody...thanks for sharing.. "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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